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fullview please

this is the scetch of my entry critic please :blushes:
i choosed the theme ying and yang
the colours it will be coloured in are black and white

i hope it`s not to much and not to few :)

karo

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~Y-Genya-Y:iconY-Genya-Y: May 7, 2008, 1:18:14 PM
Those are very cute and the ruffles give it a romantic feel. I like the top of the 'night' look - it is very unusual. I would have removed the black circle on the skirt of the 'day' look, as well as the cutouts on the 'day' look waist and the 'night' look skirt. It is a bit too literal, in my opinion, and i think they make it look a bit outdated. looking forward to your finished look!
*Kallastyos:iconKallastyos: May 7, 2008, 2:10:58 PM
I would remove some details in both looks actually. Keep what makes this garment "couture" or innovative/detail oriented, but yeah the circles do confuse things. Maybe obscure how you interpret ying and yang.

If the fabric is light and fluttery, you may want to take that into consideration when it comes to coloring.

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~tamira-shine:icontamira-shine: May 7, 2008, 2:16:35 PM
I love the night one and I find the day one pretty interesting

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~Rallya:iconRallya: May 8, 2008, 8:05:05 AM Mood: Joy
Well... they're pretty... :D I don't really have the inspiration required for constructive criticism right now... O.o Anyhow, good job!

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~l-luzi-l:iconl-luzi-l: May 8, 2008, 9:36:46 AM
thanks a lot for the critic :) i will try to follow it as good as i can :D

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~l-luzi-l:iconl-luzi-l: May 8, 2008, 9:46:27 AM
hm that`s true i`ll try to change that thanks for your critic <3
also thanks for the watch i`m honoured :aww: I`ll watch you back :)

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~l-luzi-l:iconl-luzi-l: May 8, 2008, 9:53:14 AM
XDDD it`s okay but thanks anyway i still aprecciate your comment ^.^

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~l-luzi-l:iconl-luzi-l: May 13, 2008, 7:55:08 AM
thanks a lot :3 i`m glad you like it ^.^

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~tamira-shine:icontamira-shine: May 13, 2008, 11:40:53 AM
:D

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"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese."

"The baby has known the dragon intimately ever since he had an imagination. What the fairy tale provides for him is a St. George to kill the dragon."

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